Olivia TS#13

On October 17th I met Domingos at Strozier. He brought his speech, and asked me to look over it. I read it and looked over his grammar. There were a few points that needed help but other than that it was a good essay. He told me that his own teacher liked his topic a lot. We looked over some of his examples, like the UC Santa Barbara shooter. He wanted to highlight certain groups in gun violence, such as women. He talked about how some people feel that gun issues are women's issues because of safety. After we cleaned up his speech he told me he was invited to speak at a Students Demand Action meeting. Students Demand Action, SDA, is a pro-gun control group on campus who invited him to speak on his outsider perspective on gun violence. He tells me that Brazil is a very dangerous place with a lot of violence, but one is more likely to get shot in the United States because of guns. Overall his essay is going well.